if my tears could bring you back

Category: Writers Block

Post 1 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Monday, 06-Jun-2005 13:12:56

If my tears could bring you back, Mommy

I'd've never let you go

If life was great and life was fine

I'd've never let you go

I'm finding it hard to sleep tonight

I'm finding it hard to eat

Life goes on, but it's a lie

You're the one I seek

If my tears could bring you back, Mommy

I'd cry a thousand tears

I'd let you hold me in your arms

And destroy all my lifelong fears

But tears won't bring you back

Somehow this has been realized

I'm still crying like they can, Mommy

I guess we can all take the time to idealize

If my tears could bring you back, Mommy

I'd cry a thousand tears

I'd let you rock me in your arms

And together erase these last seven years

Post 2 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Monday, 06-Jun-2005 13:15:04

Wow, Daniel, did you write that?!

Post 3 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Monday, 06-Jun-2005 13:29:59

yes that was my 3rd poem i wrote.

i also write stories

Post 4 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Monday, 06-Jun-2005 13:34:14

Ooh, e-mail me your stories sometime!!! I would love to see them!!! I myself am a writer. My e-mail addie is thesongwriter@members.zonebbs.com

Post 5 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Monday, 06-Jun-2005 13:36:33

cool thanks.

i'll send you my stories and add you to hotmail

Post 6 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Monday, 06-Jun-2005 13:37:25

oh yes and i'd love to know what you write

Post 7 by asdfghjkl (Account disabled) on Monday, 06-Jun-2005 15:07:22

Well, my poems and songs are on the Writers' Block board, but ya might hafta dig 'em out, haha. If ya wanna see a play I wrote and a novel I might end up finishing, e-mail me, and I'll send 'em to ya.

Post 8 by alison (my ISP would be out of business if it wasn't for this haven I live at) on Monday, 06-Jun-2005 23:07:07

I liked that poem when you sent it to me, it was great. You're working on a novel, mel? Fun! i have only finished...*counts* two stories. LOL!

Post 9 by Inesle1987 (Account disabled) on Tuesday, 07-Jun-2005 10:08:28

Awa, it nearly made me cry. But it is a great one, honestly. May I ask if this is based on a true story?

Post 10 by dissonance (Help me, I'm stuck to my chair!) on Wednesday, 08-Jun-2005 20:21:24

Hi, Stargate. Never talked to you before...yet, but that was a really great poem! I wish I could write something like that! It is really great. You write stories, Mel? That's awesome. Your stories are awesome Alison.

Post 11 by laced-unlaced (Account disabled) on Friday, 10-Jun-2005 3:47:12

well i'm glad you like it. i aim to please

Post 12 by AllieCat (Account disabled) on Friday, 10-Jun-2005 3:51:07

Oh yes ... we are all very much pleased ... you know, us and our conformist way of thinking.

Post 13 by Tiramisu (Generic Zoner) on Friday, 10-Jun-2005 4:00:20

hey you people, i love reading and i would love that poem sg, very touching. And, Mel, yes do send some of your compositions to me, I would love to read them, sg too/ Please, fill my hungry soul!!! Bravo!!!